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"This Is Going to Hurt." by ~PassiveIre:iconPassiveIre:


©2008 ~PassiveIre
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Submitted: March 18
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This is the sketch of part of Cari's story that I will never finish writing in my head. From left to right: Cari, Trevor, Frau. I particularly like Frau because it's the only picture I've drawn of her grown-up and interacting with other people. I can't figure out why always draw multiple people all in profile. I guess I'm hesitant to try people at different distances in the picture plane. I just wanted to practice a holding hands pose. I'm not sure I like Trevor's arm, I can never get the arm to look like it's naturally turned back. I'm getting closer though. I have started inking this one, but I don't know when I'll get to finish it.

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~MitoraAkamori:iconMitoraAkamori: Mar 25, 2008, 8:06:06 PM
Hrmmm...Its a little stiff dear. It may be cause Cari and Trevor are standing so close. I would maybe try to expand it a little to allow for more...comfortable looking positions. Maybe give Trevor more of a slouch leaning back so he can kinda "shy away" from the needle. But otherwise it looks nice. ^^

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"It's hard for many people to believe that there are extraordinary things inside themselves, as well as others. I hope you can keep an open mind."
~KaminaRhea:iconKaminaRhea: Apr 30, 2008, 10:43:04 AM
I love the subtle hand-touching <3

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I wish I was a hunter,
In search of different food,
I wish I was the animal,
Which fits into that mood...


"Buzz buzz!"--Hamlet
~PassiveIre:iconPassiveIre: May 1, 2008, 3:32:19 AM
<3 ^_________^

*hugs you* Thankies! It's still not exactly what I wanted, but I worked really hard on it! (Can you tell from all the erased lines? ^_^; )

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~ Erin :shamrock: